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I have mostly copied and pasted the same comment as I did for Connor, because you have worked together on the photography. Between you, you have done a pretty good job of getting used to the camera, and I am particularly impressed by the way that you used lighting and attended to detail in terms of mise en scene in the last of your photographs. Obviously, that is the one with you in it, so I hope that you were aware of what was going on in camera. As I said to Connor, you've displayed your pictures well, but it is not perfectly clear that you understand the full relationship between shutter, iso and fstop (iris). Make sure that you are aware of that, especially as you start to take the photos for your music magazine. When you feel you have really taken a good photo, make a note of those three elements because you will tend to return to the same settings often, with just small changes for artistic effect.
A solid job, now try to marry good attention to lighting and mise en scene with your creative use of layout and design to get an A grade for your music magazine task.
Hello Joe. Don't forget to create the new tab for - 00. Teacher's Comment and post this new comment into it:
ReplyDeleteI have mostly copied and pasted the same comment as I did for Connor, because you have worked together on the photography. Between you, you have done a pretty good job of getting used to the camera, and I am particularly impressed by the way that you used lighting and attended to detail in terms of mise en scene in the last of your photographs. Obviously, that is the one with you in it, so I hope that you were aware of what was going on in camera. As I said to Connor, you've displayed your pictures well, but it is not perfectly clear that you understand the full relationship between shutter, iso and fstop (iris). Make sure that you are aware of that, especially as you start to take the photos for your music magazine. When you feel you have really taken a good photo, make a note of those three elements because you will tend to return to the same settings often, with just small changes for artistic effect.
A solid job, now try to marry good attention to lighting and mise en scene with your creative use of layout and design to get an A grade for your music magazine task.